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Submitted: March 30, 2004
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~benr1989:iconbenr1989: Mar 30, 2004, 11:34:30 PM
i like the background and the idea, but the mask itself is ehh... the blue glow streaks on it are definitely out of place.. better quality and smother edges and the abscence of that blue glow would add a lot. the janeX thing seems out of place as well. the background does add a lot though.

the wings also need a bit more color tho

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~idlemotormovement:iconidlemotormovement: Mar 31, 2004, 12:05:01 AM
the compistion is very strange...you have 4 objects all about the same size and all those are about the same color too...didnt notice that at first...but i think you need to vary a lot of what you have...namly scale
~faithdivine88:iconfaithdivine88: Mar 31, 2004, 12:17:31 AM
the bg and the concept is good, though i can't explain why i believe so. the mask is a nice centerpiece, but the blue cracks on it seem a bit distracting; same goes for the janeX thingey. ^^; some of the edges need to be smoother. the wings are pretty, but they need more life. :heart: i hope you are not offended with my comment. :floating:
~philter2001:iconphilter2001: Mar 31, 2004, 11:43:44 AM
Very nice manip. Everything is pieced together nicely. I'm not sure how I feel about those blue lines though. Kind of flattens everything a bit. Other than that, great job!

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~feardorcha:iconfeardorcha: Mar 31, 2004, 4:38:21 PM
this is fantastic....excellent colours and contrasts, everything seems to complement everything else

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~OlorinIcanus:iconOlorinIcanus: Mar 31, 2004, 6:14:34 PM
Good composition of images. I agree with the others, but not so much. I think that the vivid blue should be toned down a bit, so that its not so glaring. This would make it blend with the rest of the images much better. I edges of the face need to be smoother. I like the background though. Good deviation.

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~FathersLastBreathe:iconFathersLastBreathe: Apr 1, 2004, 5:34:19 PM
nice job this is really cool....love the colors the sceneray and soooo much more...

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~janeXart:iconjaneXart: Apr 1, 2004, 6:37:10 PM
no not offended at all
thanks gonna work on it

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~vistonie-dravnos:iconvistonie-dravnos: Apr 1, 2004, 11:20:08 PM
Oh this is much better Way to go hun