i like the background and the idea, but the mask itself is ehh... the blue glow streaks on it are definitely out of place.. better quality and smother edges and the abscence of that blue glow would add a lot. the janeX thing seems out of place as well. the background does add a lot though.
the compistion is very strange...you have 4 objects all about the same size and all those are about the same color too...didnt notice that at first...but i think you need to vary a lot of what you have...namly scale
the bg and the concept is good, though i can't explain why i believe so. the mask is a nice centerpiece, but the blue cracks on it seem a bit distracting; same goes for the janeX thingey. some of the edges need to be smoother. the wings are pretty, but they need more life. i hope you are not offended with my comment.
Very nice manip. Everything is pieced together nicely. I'm not sure how I feel about those blue lines though. Kind of flattens everything a bit. Other than that, great job!
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Good composition of images. I agree with the others, but not so much. I think that the vivid blue should be toned down a bit, so that its not so glaring. This would make it blend with the rest of the images much better. I edges of the face need to be smoother. I like the background though. Good deviation.
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the wings also need a bit more color tho
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thanks gonna work on it
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